Sunday, 1 December 2013

UMMEED - andhere me dabi roshini ki lau...

"saamna hai ummeed se...
ummeed jo dil dhadkaati hai...
ummeed jo dil ko tod jati hai...
ummeed jo jeene ki raah dikhaati hai...
ummeed jo marne ko majbur kr jati hai...
ummeed jo kabi haar nhi man ne deti...
ummeed jiske saamne zindagi haar jati hai...
ummeed jisse saanse chalti hai...
ummeed jo dam ghot jati hai...
ummeed jo sukun deti h...
aur ummeed hi tadapta chhor jati hai...
rulana hasana gussana chid chidana daant pees k reh jana kismat ko kos jana... ummeed sab sikha jati hai... sikhate sikhate 4 saal se ye saaali ummeed meri zindagi se khel dekho ab mujse dur ho jati hai.... gire thake haare hauslo me phr jaan bhr k jati hai... mujhe naya raasta dikha jati h... ummeed nayi manzil ki ummeed dikha jati hai... jeene ko...kisi se pyaar krne ko....kisi se pyaar krvane ko... ummeed phr ummeed de jati hai... meri zindagi phr sambhal le jati hai... mujhe muskurata chhr jati hai... ye keh kr ki laut aaungi mai jab b akela yaad krega mujhe... ummeed jo saya ban kr mujhi me sama jaati hai.... ummeed jis pr mai tum aur puri duniya kayam ho jati hai....
saamna isi ummeed se hai...
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6 comments:

  1. Unknown3 December 2013 at 06:47

    I am soo soo so proud at this moment that finally that day has come when I see your blog with my eyes (that too in this birth of mine)! thank you! "ummeed" is an epic poem which everyone shall remember for a long time from now!
    I hope your blog takes you to so many places and you reach new success heights! :)
    God bless you soo soo much!

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  2. Kshitij3 December 2013 at 12:40

    Thank you so mch aavika...i was waiting for ur comment...:D :D

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  3. Unknown16 December 2013 at 09:05

    Congratulations on new blog.

    Good poem to start with..

    Keep writing !!

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  4. Wondrous_Artisan28 January 2014 at 09:56

    Very true. Though broken hopes does hurt, but then hope of a better future always makes us stand again. Well-expressed. :)

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  5. Unknown27 July 2014 at 13:24

    this is ur first entry...and the last one i read....so commenting for each one the entries collectively....the grip u hav over hindi is remarkable, i dun know if its a big deal for everyone or not but for me it is... ur expressive and bold to write evry detail u feel....
    Hindi poems are beautiful....and u have a fan now..

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  6. Unknown27 July 2014 at 13:28

    one of* the entries

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